Misadventures of Nano / pt 7
This entire scene/series of scenes is going to have to be cut in the end, sigh. |||OTL
Or if I’m not going to cut it, I’m going to have to figure out why Avien would invoke the Soryuu Sentoki Kai (I TOLD YOU IT WAS RETARDED RANDOM JAPANESE); it’s not something she would normally do, especially against a wimpy opponent. :/
ETA: …crap. Am I actually behind now? ><
ETA2: So. many. fight scenes. Give me a break guys I'm almost out ;_; Whenever I get stuck, I make a fight? ffffffffff ('Cept in Avien's case the last time because those fights against the soldiers were necessary and I was actually struggling through those.) But this is kind of ridiculoussssssss
ETA3: So many colloquiallisms I'm going to have to change. |||OTL
ETA4: Instead of using pron for padding, I use FIGHT SCENES! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA Though mostly this is because no character has a love interest pfffffffffft.
ETA5: …When had my English/PPP classes been affecting my novel?
~sigh~ From the beginning, I suppose, from the very moment I introduced Sephine. But man. There’s no end to stuff I have to cut out in Editting if I want this to be liek a real novel.
ETA6: CRITICAL QUESTION. Who wins in a fight, Avien or Hal? 8D;;;
ETA6.2: Ren says Avien. But he’s biased; Sephine would say Hal, ffffff. The easy solution would have them just not face off. But that’s boringgggg
ETA6.3: If I keep making similarities between Avien and Hal, they’re going to randomly end up as twins/clones later on. :| The problem is that Avien never really had a personality to begin with, and now Hal is liek stoic so Hal keeps ending up resembling Avien, orz. That’s part of the reason I need them to face off, regardless of whether or not this face-off actually appears in the novel. When I make them fight, I necessarily have to create differences, and in those fighting differences, others will follow.
…Or something.
ETA6.4: AHA.
It was as if her force and speed existed in a zero-sum relationship; speed going down while power went up, or speed going up while power went up.
Hal self-imposes this restriction because of her emo past; if/when she faces Avien, she gets serious and doesn’t do this. But fighting Ren (and anyone else not as skilled), she does this. (Sorta like Kenshin’s reverse blade from Rurouni Kenshin. Not that I’ve actually ever watched/read that but hey, good metaphor is good metaphor neeeee? |D
ETA6.5: OH SO THAT’S WHAT IT IS. Avien and Hal are foils; Avien was repressed from childhood and on meeting Ren gets freer; Hal was someone who had (relatively) free reign in the beginning but limits and restricts herself afterward.
ETA7: I’m at 26062 right now, LMAO
ETA8: OH HI DEN WASSUP
ETA9: LOL FINE I’LL STOP SPAMMING/ETA’ING THIS POST
nanowrimo 08 | Jac the Tripper | 14 November 2008 |
