…fuck. I thought I’d have to add things, and then I find I’m 186 words over the max word count for this assignment. ;_; And my sentences are already so sparse and disjointed and…sparse! This makes me unhappy. ;_;

And I still have yet to do the poem. Which I should have done first, what with the poem being the basis, but I am made of utter fail when it comes to poetry. >[ Also, 80 words. I have liek 30 so far. Which is kinda ironic IDEK GUYS

ETA: …OK fuck the poem and my overlong word count. Mele, Rio I’M COMING GUYSSS~~ :DDDDDD ~gets kicked in the face~ This fic is nearly done, I just need to pad out one or two of the scenes. I’m just kinda having trouble with Mele in the bath because I just stuck it in there as something for her to do. So this part is pretty bare-bones but I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT ELSE TO PUT IN IT. ;;_;; And I can’t help feeling like the breakfast scene is a bit odd. -_- Do I usually take such care in my other fics? The answer is a big fat “no”, but this is one of those where, instead of a scene first, I came up with the structure, and was just filling things in, hence why I talk about padding some scenes (as opposed to just leaving it if, transitionally, the rhythm is right). So yea idek. @_@

ETA2: …I just typed out what I had for a poem (I’d written some lines in my notebook some days ago). I actually have 72 words.

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8D

Also I used odd formatting FUCK YEAH. Since I’m not, y’know, using any sentences or anything. ddd

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